I admit...i surrender
its a torture i have to bear,
its only his voice i long to hear
But!!!
but i have to wait ...
wait ...till i make a few thing clear
only i know how much i long to make u hear
dat "i love u dear..."
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2 comments:
that was awesome...
simple, unique and fun...
a gud poem for a beginner.
but as you mature, you would need to think a little deeper. This one was skin deep.
Hope that helps.
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